The Malingerer

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sadeyes, Sep 13, 2011.

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  1. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I.
    Play me; go on and play me.
    Tell me you’ve done nothing,
    then I find out you have.

    Delude me; subdue me.
    Lie to me, and use me.
    Swear I am mistaken,
    then live with the bad.

    Protest and threaten.
    Object and accuse.
    You must live
    in your own skin.
    Ashamed, belittled
    and bemused.

    II.
    You wear your self-pity
    like a stole that should fit.
    Thinking that the others
    do not see right
    through it.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :hugtackles::hugtackles::hugtackles::hugtackles:
     
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    So very well written...I particularly appreciate the rhythm and rhyme in the third stanza.

    Also, know you are cared about. :hug:
     
  4. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    i found this very moving, and well written. :hug:
     
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