The Mirror

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Butterfly, Mar 20, 2011.

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  1. Butterfly

    Butterfly Resident SF Sims Enthusiast Staff Alumni SF Author SF Supporter

    I see her every day
    I see her every night
    In pain, afraid and broken
    She holds her teddy tight.

    You look upon the surface
    A superficial smile
    However on the inside
    So insecure, so fragile.

    The frustration that she feels
    She knows that she must hide
    Her thoughts are so corrosive
    It eats her up inside.

    Often she feels nothing
    If only she could cry
    She's staring at the ceiling
    Wishing she could die.

    Another day has passed
    Another day in bed
    Paralysed by sadness
    And her poisoned head.

    A bully to herself
    Her body and her mind
    Punishing herself
    She treats herself unkind.

    I am looking in the mirror
    I despise what I can see
    I have come to realise
    That damaged girl is me.
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  3. texaskitty

    texaskitty SF Friend and Antiquities Friend Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    oh hun :hug: beautiful but so sad. hope you feel better real soon and I'm always here for you.
  4. hardcore

    hardcore Well-Known Member

    I really how the poem subtly moved towards its end with description. I felt every line.
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