The miscarried

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Malcontent, Feb 23, 2007.

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  1. Malcontent

    Malcontent Staff Alumni

    *possibly triggering* This ain't very good at all

    Lost children of this world.
    Never took their first breath,
    Never knew love,
    Never gazed up at the sky in wonder.
    But they swim in starlight now.
    Two brothers,
    One older,
    One younger,
    And a son.
    The miscarried watch over me always.
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Oh Mal, that is so sadly beautiful!! I like the phrase "but they swim in starlight now". That's so lovely!

    love and hugs,

  3. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    aww mally mal, it was beautiful..sad, but beautiful :hug:
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