The night you had to go

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by *dilligaf*, Oct 2, 2008.

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  1. *dilligaf*

    *dilligaf* Staff Alumni

    When I woke up that morning,
    Everything was fine,
    The sun was shining
    And you were still mine.

    I went out for a while,
    I went for a walk.
    By the time I came home,
    You could barely talk.

    I wish I could go back in time,
    Back to that night.
    I would get you help in time,
    And you would be alright.

    Time went so quickly,
    I really don't know.
    What happened the night
    You had to go.

    It happened so quick,
    Such a surprise.
    I'll never understand why
    You had to close your eyes
     
  2. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    The words come straight from your heart and anyone reading them can tell. Sam please dont feel guilty about that night. You know it meant losing her but it also meant an end to her pain. She didnt want to leave you either hun, but she had to. She is still and always will be your Nan sweetie.
     
  3. Anju

    Anju Well-Known Member

    Lovely poem...'The words come straight from your heart and anyone reading them can tell'- I agree wholeheartedly.
     
  4. *dilligaf*

    *dilligaf* Staff Alumni

    thank you both :smile:
     
  5. tintin

    tintin Guest

    that is amazing hun, i love it

    :heart:
     
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