The Ocean/Free Gift

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  1. justsomegirl

    justsomegirl Well-Known Member

    Free Gift

    A gift given freely and not bound by chains
    Promising neither losses nor gains
    At once both shy and eager to please
    Sees only the beauty in the colors it bleeds.

    the Ocean

    The ocean, to me, has always seemed
    Moving art in blues and greens.
    Undertow pulls life down deep
    While rolling waves lull to sleep.
    The surface covers deep and dark
    Much like faces cover hearts.
     
  2. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    A gift given freely and not bound by chains
    Promising neither losses nor gains
    At once both shy and eager to please
    Sees only the beauty in the colors it bleeds.

    Soooooo true Lauryn
    Altruism/philanthropy is so liberating for the heart & soul
    Check out this site:

    http://www.randomactsofkindness.org/

    :freehug:
     
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  3. justsomegirl

    justsomegirl Well-Known Member

    Whhatt? Dude that's awesome, I'm all over it. Thanks for the link! :hug:
     
  4. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    yvw Lauryn

    :freehug:
     
  5. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

    that was awesome short but sweet, still awesome tho, going to rate it five stars. *thumbup
     
  6. justsomegirl

    justsomegirl Well-Known Member

    Thanks dude! :)
     
  7. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

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