The Past

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    The sun shines down on the grave. She's dead, gone. You dont believe in God, but whisper a prayer just in case. You angrily wipe away a tear. you have to forgive what she's done. Not to you, but to herself. You tried to save her from the past she couldnt let go. You feel her presence behind you, but when you turn around to look, its only the wind. You say "i love you" once more, before leaving the girl that got away.
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    That was another great poem.
     
  3. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    it was one that i did when i was dating...my last boyfriend..no further back then that..and it was like me telling them about me killing myself.
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    well its a great poem and the emotions in it are great!

    BP
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
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