The Rage...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by sadangel, Jan 20, 2012.

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  1. sadangel

    sadangel Active Member

    Tears that started welling up in my eyes,
    begin to trickle down my face,
    As I try to think of the words to write,
    but all I see is the lines of the page,
    Seeing that reminds me how I feel inside,
    The tears continue and inside builds this rage,
    I take the pencil in my hand and throw it across the room,
    the paper I tear in pieces
    a line of curse words echo across the emptiness,
    The words that I wanted to write
    never seemed to say it right,
    Why is it so hard to say how I feel
    when I know exactly how to feel it,
    I sob and cover my face with my hands,
    I feel the thoughts begin to race
    and the rage begins to overtake
    I toss the desk and curse your name,
    I swear that you will pay for the pain,
    I want so badly to leave this place,
    I want it so bad that the rage explodes,
    I find my pencil and my paper,
    I write a simple note upon the page,
    "You don't care and you never did",
    Then I take the paper and fold it up,
    Put your name upon the top,
    This will be the last words that I write,
    for today will be the day that I take my life!!
     
  2. Tmacster1

    Tmacster1 Well-Known Member

    A well written well though out poem. You put lots of emotion and time into it. I'm going to say good job :) because your poem had lots of good emotion behind it.

    Trevor,
     
  3. sadangel

    sadangel Active Member

    Believe it or Not that took 10 minutes
     
  4. Tmacster1

    Tmacster1 Well-Known Member

    Thats pretty good for only 10 minutes. I wish I could write like that. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of them. :)

    Trevor,
     
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