The Realization

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  1. mlxjaded

    mlxjaded Well-Known Member


    The Realization

    The days of being hopeful and ambitious are forever gone
    The only life I have ahead of me are days of misery beginning at dawn
    To be forever young and to never decay
    I was too busy fooling myself to truly see
    That I let the best years of my life slip away from me
    But now it’s not myself I have to worry about, but the forces of life itself
    And if I could turn back the clock, I would in a heartbeat
    But I cannot, so what am I to do
    Even at the end I’ll refuse to admit defeat
    I need to find a way to break through
    But I’ve not got the slightest clue
    Of what I'm supposed to do
     
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  2. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Hello Mike,

    I think some of us here can definitely relate to living in the past (myself included). In a nutshell, I enjoyed seeing how you put it all together, and I'm really digging your latest poems! Great stuff; keep it up! :stars:

    ~ Alex
     
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