The Reflection

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Clockwork Reality, Nov 28, 2009.

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  1. Clockwork Reality

    Clockwork Reality Well-Known Member

    This is a paraphrase of a poem I wrote nearly eight years ago. I hope you enjoy.

    I look in the mirror
    and see my reflection
    he smiles and laughs

    In the mirror, he is happy
    his life is his own
    he has no time for the other side

    My reflection smiles sadly at me
    and slowly walks away
    I hate my reflection

    I smash the mirror upon the ground
    the reflection screams in pain
    And it's my turn to laugh
     
  2. bubblin girl

    bubblin girl Well-Known Member

    nice...love it...i can related to it...keep it up
     
  3. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Very meditative. I love it.

    :Leiaha:
     
  4. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Hope someday soon both reflections smile and you can smile back.
     
  5. Clockwork Reality

    Clockwork Reality Well-Known Member

    Nah, that guy's a dick. **** him. :):biggrin:
     
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