The Sun Shines

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by pit, Aug 3, 2010.

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  1. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    The Sun shines
    And the Moon beams
    For the Kekkul or Mullah
    Who hath dropped his knife,
    gun, grenade, bombs of destruction,
    falls to his knees,
    and worms his way back into the womb
    of Mother Kaya, Nature, Kali, the Nurterer
    And says his Moslimm way is Mistaken.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    love your words they stirr emotion great write
  3. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Thank you.

  4. Krem

    Krem Well-Known Member

    You speaking of Muslims? 'cause Kali is hindu, not muslim. Just pointing out. Still a nice poem, although could be seen as racist. :eek:

    (Just figured since you said mullah, which is a Muslim male, and 'Moslimm', which I'm asuming is a typo for Muslim. Have no idea what Kekkul or Kaya are.)
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Krem de la Creme, what's up. All mispellings are intentional.
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