The sun that will not fade

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by twilightki, Aug 9, 2007.

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  1. twilightki

    twilightki Well-Known Member

    The sun that will not fade
    inside you
    theres a flame
    eternal and bright,
    it pulses in my sight.
    It can be dim
    but you alone
    have the kindling.
    There may be some help
    even only a bit,
    but you can ignite it.

    -Me
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    twilightki,
    I love your poem. It is deep and it is powerful. I love the way that you worded it. I hope to see more poems from you here soon. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
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