The Terminus of Sin

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Mar 11, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    The Terminus of Sin

    Gaze into that portal of damnation intently
    And you might realize
    It’s your mind’s eye staring back
    Like some half-submerged crocodile
    Hungrily awaiting a king’s feast

    To that end, you’ve seen the stairway down
    You’ve gone around
    Without a sound
    Past the gates of a surreal thought prison

    This is the terminus of sin
    A great lake traversed
    An overlord enemy
    Once deified
    Now simply defied

    White-shrouded misery
    is simply
    Blown away
    Led astray
    To the ends of the earth​
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it!:smile: What a very interesting concept and so well-put.:smile:

    least
     
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    thanks least. This was inspired by music, usually when I write my best poetry.
     
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