The Truth

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by mlxjaded, Sep 27, 2011.

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  1. mlxjaded

    mlxjaded Well-Known Member

    The Truth

    I know how the world ends
    Trust me, trust me, why me
    At least I know how it does for me
    Eye can see how it ends
    Alone with my loneliness and pain
    Just us two again
    Old friends
    Slowly and surely driving me insane

    But I love it


     
  2. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Thanks for sharing. These are dark and deep IMHO. =]
     
  3. mlxjaded

    mlxjaded Well-Known Member

    Thanks! I try to be deep and dark so I'm glad it comes across :) I have a couple more that I'm unsure if I should post but I might later on. As always, thanks for reading!
     
  4. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    Ok, I look forward to your next one!!
     
  5. BeautifullyChaotic

    BeautifullyChaotic Well-Known Member

    This is beautiful, and so honest. Keep writing, you are a wonderful writer :)
     
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