The Wedding

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Isa, Sep 7, 2007.

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  1. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    The Wedding

    With this knife,
    I thee wed.
    With dark letters,
    To silent dead.

    With these lips,
    A poisoned kiss,
    All bad things,
    Come down to this.

    With these tears,
    I surrender,
    And giving up,
    Is what will end her.

    With this knife,
    I me, bled,
    With dark dreams,
    Of being dead.

    With these words,
    I am breaking,
    And hoping not to wake up,
    Aching.

    With these thoughts,
    I am cursed,
    Overwhelmed,
    and immersed.

    With this ring,
    I thee wed.
    A ring of rope,
    Over my head.

    With this goodbye,
    That cant console,
    I give my body,
    And pray for my soul.
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Isa,
    Wow this poem is very powerful. It is deep and very emotional. I hope to see more work of yours here in the future. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Even though i already said so before.. i'll say it again - i <3 it!
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    beautiful poem hun :)
     
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