The Wonders PLEASE READ/RATE/COMMENT

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by white, Aug 13, 2008.

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  1. white

    white Well-Known Member

    The wonders
    As I look towards the ocean
    Watch the waves row on
    And Watch the waves waves wash away
    I stand there
    Looking
    Deep
    at the never ending water
    and I think of the wonders
    I look at the mountains
    I look up
    Though I cant see the top
    Looking tall
    Feeling small
    And I see the wonders
    I look at the never ending skys
    As far as the telescope can see
    To all the stars
    Far to many to count
    All from the God who created me
     
  2. rojomi

    rojomi Banned Member

    imho very good content, end line may leave some:confused:
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Awesome poem hun :arms:
     
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