Think of Me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by lulu rose, Nov 9, 2007.

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  1. lulu rose

    lulu rose Guest

    Think of me the next time you kiss.
    of my red wine lips
    and my slender hips

    Think of me the next time you embrace.
    Of my smiling face
    sets your heart a race

    Think of me the next time you touch.
    Of my love so much
    and my satin touch

    Think of me the next time you cry.
    of my tear soaked eyes
    my stomach, with butterflys

    Think of me the next time you make love.
    That fit, like a glove.
    White skin, like a dove.

    But most of all
    think of me
    when I'm dead and gone
    think of me
    for without your love
    I simply cant ever be.​

    Very much how I feel.
     
  2. 13acresofhell

    13acresofhell Member

    Well written, and it captures the emotions precisely. I know that train of thought and rode it down hill on many an occasion.
     
  3. lulu rose

    lulu rose Guest

    The thing is though. I hope that, if he ever finds someone else. When he looks at them, all he sees is me. I want him to need me. Its like someone stabbing me in the heart when he said he diddnt want me anymore.

    Thank you though
     
  4. Lucie

    Lucie Well-Known Member

    It's beautiful :cry:
     
  5. smackh2o

    smackh2o SF Supporter

    wow :sad:
    So deep
     
  6. lulu rose

    lulu rose Guest

    Thank you so much
     
  7. Trip the Dark fantastic

    Trip the Dark fantastic Well-Known Member

    Great images of love, lust and loss. A good example of how to approach the big issues in our lifes with only the barest and most minimalistic words...:cool::cool:
     
  8. lulu rose

    lulu rose Guest

    Thank you. ^_^

    I'm wondering though. I've done 5 poems now, should I just keep it all in 1 thread? I fear I'm cluttering the forums >_<
     
  9. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Fab poem :D
     
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