This Is Love

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Domo, Sep 21, 2010.

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  1. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    I need to cut my heart out.

    I want to see my organs spilling onto the floor as you watch me try and insert them all back in.

    You know they won't fit.

    So do I.

    I need to see my putrid blood oozing out of lacerations that are rotten and infected. The flow, pathetic, as it catches against aged pus.

    I can't breath.

    Nor do i want to.
     
  2. Landlocked blues

    Landlocked blues Well-Known Member

    This is sad :sad:
     
  3. boo

    boo Well-Known Member

    Ya very sad :(
     
  4. Twinkle ☆ Twinkle

    Twinkle ☆ Twinkle Well-Known Member

    Yeah, I agree that it's sad. Creates and image that's a litte gross too.
     
  5. lightbeam

    lightbeam Antiquities Friend

    How sad! You OK Domo?
     
  6. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    Yup - Sad and disgusting is what i was aiming for.

    Not really lightbeam. Thank you for asking though.
     
  7. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well you will never be disgusting Domo never take care okay
     
  8. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    hope a *hug* helps
     
  9. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    It's alright guys. I wasn't seeking anything from this.

    Just something i needed to write.
     
  10. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    This is beautiful in a way, at least i think so. Very dark, but seems like such a brutally honest capture of emotions. really deep. i like it. :)
     
  11. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    Why thank you Amni :hug:

    I honestly didn't think i'd get any responses to this. I am far from a poet. I was just trying to express what i was feeling at the time. I was unable to do so in the 'normal' way but i felt able to turn it into something more physical. If that makes sense?
     
  12. vanish

    vanish Member

    I really liked it, dark, detailed, to the point.
     
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