This Is The End!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Marshmallow, Sep 23, 2006.

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  1. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    I wouldn't really call this a poem didn't know where to put it, so i put it here, just something i just wrote, anyway here goes:

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    This Is The End​


    You watch me
    Study me
    Looking for when im low
    Your're like a demon to me
    A demon who needs to control
    To control me
    Control my feelings
    Control my thoughts

    When im low you make it worse
    Make me go in a spiral direction down to your level
    Heading down to your place of residence
    HELL!

    You want me there
    You want that control
    You want to own me
    You want to own my thought
    You want to watch me 24/7
    You survive on that control
    But remember we don't allways get what we want

    This is the end
    I've had enough!
    Enough of your controlling ways!
    Next time i will destroy you
    I will destroy you with my strength
    My determination to not let you succeed in your sick mission

    This is the end!!!
    This is the end!!
    This is the end!
    This is the end​
     
  2. emma-louise

    emma-louise Guest

    Wowz! that is really good -huggles tight-
     
  3. danni

    danni Chat Buddy

    aww this is really good hun :hug:
     
  4. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    very passionate. i likey vikki :)
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem hun :)
     
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