This man

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Malcontent, Jan 22, 2007.

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  1. Malcontent

    Malcontent Staff Alumni

    This man, he keeps a knife under his bed
    This man, he kicks holes in the walls
    This man, he treats women likes whores
    This man, doesn't even take his hat off to fuck

    This man, stabs his own leg when he's bored
    This man, he doesn't sleep
    This man, he likes the taste of blood
    This man, he makes plans to kill you

    This man, I'm worried that he's me

    (I did this in five minutes, so it's a bit shit)
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear Mal;

    I don't believe that "this man" is you at all - maybe just feels that way, but I don't think he is. I think you're a whole lot better man than that deep inside!!:smile: :smile:

    love,:hug: :hug:

  3. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    i dont think that you are like that at all. It's a great poem, but nontheless not you.
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    it was a great poem hun...

    i agree its not you... but its your feelings out on paper...

    and because it was done in five minutes, doesnt make it crap...

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