This solar system is not enough.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by TheWr0ngChild, Nov 1, 2008.

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  1. TheWr0ngChild

    TheWr0ngChild Well-Known Member

    Give me a million suns
    You could light them up like jilted guns
    A foreign soldier and a weathered sailor
    Cast me a line only a second too late

    This was the year I shaded out
    The true hues ran through
    The time to roll my credits is here
    I can’t say I have any fears

    This will not be my last fail
    My breath from now on is coffin nails
    Not even light escapes this black hole
    So welcome to the final episode of my soul.
  2. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni

    the title and the first line of this hit me hard
  3. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    excellent! loved it! :biggrin:
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