Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, Sep 26, 2006.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    Finding it difficult to hold on to life,
    I wanted to make one last plee.
    Hoping that people would understand
    and not think negatively of me.
    So many thoughts are going through my head,
    what I want to say and do,
    but the one thing that sticks out the most,
    is how much I love you.
    You must understand that you're not to blame,
    I do not want you to be sad.
    I'm not worth the time or energy,
    and I'm sure many people would be glad.
    I'm sorry it has come to this,
    the pain is just too much.
    I'm dying inside day by day
    and I can't seem to stand up.
    Crashing to the ground
    and struggling to breath.
    Holding my head above water
    and now,
    I'm too weak,
    and need,
    to feel
    at ease.
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Lovely, lovely!!:smile: :smile: (tho I hate the feelings afflicting us all when we post our deepest darkest thoughts and fears...:sad: ) Hate the feelings, love the poem!:smile: :smile: :smile:

  3. What Least said. It was a poignant expression... And I feel for you...the burden is so hard to understand for some. But hang on - others here are with you, for you...Keep writing - you've a way with words, even in your sorrow

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