Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ari, Mar 1, 2007.

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  1. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    The barrage of words
    that invade the ravaged mind
    in the devine, bent over time
    in this design the madness
    inside cries to the twisted vine
    The earth is beneath, talking to the clouds
    calling the names of the damned
    in eternity, in pain defined
    in defiance the eyes shy from fear
    the warning clear, do not peer
    the chasm below calling seductively
    The strength is belied, not tried and true
    The time grows close
    The time grows near
    The time is now
    as I continue to fall in the lost pools of endless unwanted emotions
  2. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :clap:


    Thanks so much for sharing!! I love it!
  3. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    That's beautiful <3
  4. Robin

    Robin Guest

    That was a very well written poem Ari, I'm just sorry you had to draw from experience to write it though :hug:
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautifully, tho painfully written. I like it tho I wish your feelings weren't so sorrowful.:sad:

    love and hugs,

  6. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    Time allows you to draw from the well of pain
    shame overcomes inlaid in the insaneness
    strength belies and shies away
    stay a bit away for my tether is weak,
    and as I drown, I fear for you that hold on
    let go, lest you hold, you go down with me
    into the deep sea of this depravity
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