Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Gemballs, May 31, 2009.

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  1. Gemballs

    Gemballs Well-Known Member

    this was the 1st poem i wrote when i started to feel the way i did, sorry its not that good

    a sweet smile may rest upon my face
    but if you take a moment
    to glare into my eyes
    storm clouds are what billow
    tears are glazing
    like rainy day skies

    the sun i havent seen
    since im unable to remeberwhen
    the misty grey clouds
    block my vision

    Thilife has been taken over
    by that grey ticking clock
    time haunts ant taunts me
    there i just no possible way to keep up

    but when you ask me how ive been
    instantly i shall look up
    as for what else is there to say
    other than
    oh im okay
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it :)
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