Tired of you

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, Feb 23, 2006.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    I'm so fed up.
    It's all down to you.
    You don't realise, you don't have clue.
    Even if you did, would you care??
    I doubt you would and in the meantime i despair.
    I hear your words.
    What you want me to do.
    I hear you shouting and i believe you.
    They say i shouldn't.
    But i can't help it.
    I want you to shut up
    but you won't leave me alone!
    Always on at me.
    Telling me what i should do.
    Letting me know i should think the same as you.
    You've told me so many times.
    It's drilled into my head.
    I don't want to believe it
    I want to forget.
    You drive me to breaking point.
    You make me feel weak.
    I don't want to know.
    The chance of you leaving is bleak.
    And in the meantime,
    What should i do?
    Listen?
    Obey?
    Ignore or forget?
    If only it's that easy!
    I'm tired of you.
    I can't take much more.
    I hate you for thinking and making me feel small.
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that poem was filled with emotions!

    I really liked it hun!

    Love BP
     
  3. Resistance - that is a good poem. I am glad that you are able to use your emotions in poems :hug:

    Love

    Sarah
    x
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Love it :)
     
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