Tired

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  1. Tired


    Life. What a waste of time
    People. What a waste of space
    It’s such a shame
    when the first word
    out of your mouth in the morning
    is “Fuck”
    and you begrudge the coming day ~
    waiting through torturous moment after moment,
    of meaninglessness
    and regretfulness,
    pill taking,
    sleep stealing,
    for this bastardly time to end
    and finding no way out…


    FAL1
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    It hurts me to know that you are in such despair.

    least
     
  3. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    If I had any tears, I would cry. I hate your despair, and I hate that nothing will cure this world and this life. I think this is the most powerful thing you've written for a while. I can't imagine how incredible your poetry must be when you're not crippled by such feelings of despair...
     
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