Tired

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Terry, Sep 19, 2008.

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  1. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Go not quietly into that dark night
    Or so the poem goes.
    Yet I am so tired
    And quietness sounds so right.

    To sleep perchance to dream
    would that I would not.
    Yet I am so tired
    But dreaming makes me scream.

    So now I lay me down to sleep
    And pray for peace.
    For I am so tired
    And closes eyes that weep.
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it and can really relate to it.
     
  3. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Terry,
    You've gotten some really good ones out lately, not that the others were bad. lol. This one is really good. I'm taking it you couldn't sleep again last night. I woke up around 3am my time and saw you had posted this and read it then but didn't comment. I shall do so now. I can really relate to this poem about wanting to sleep but fearing dreaming. If this is the case with you I'm really sorry and you know where to find my ass if you need to talk. I love you loads.

    Kellz
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    good poem :)
     
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