to dad

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by goneforever, Oct 5, 2013.

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  1. goneforever

    goneforever Active Member

    you left me as a child to fend for my own i grew up through the gang system instead of living from a broken home
    i fought everyday and ran with the wrong crowd i hurt alot of people dad i hope your proud
    when i fight i think of you and in my eyes i see red
    im not a kid no more i wont hide from you under my bed
    i grew up on my own and i represent the broken dream
    a young kid on the streets pocket full of pills with low self esteem
    welcomed in by the only people that protected me from the usual push and a shove
    i grew up like you dad no remorse, no sympathy ... no love
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Hugs to you hun i know how hard it is to be live without a father with no one to protect you
  3. Blacky

    Blacky Well-Known Member

    Hey, I understand that, I have no dad, too. But I believe in you!
  4. loneland

    loneland Member

    I really hear a voice in these words. . . . so much sadness so deeply felt. I hope you keep writing.
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