To give into you

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Oct 10, 2006.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Fear and pain
    is all you give,
    I wont give in,
    I yearn to live.

    Buried alive,
    to much pain,
    dirt turns to mud,
    as it rains.

    Burning inside,
    Where should i go
    it is too hard to hide

    Wrapped into,
    the angels arms,
    safe from,
    the bloodshed charm.

    no isolation,
    forever free,
    no captivation,
    not even a me.

    thousands of times
    i have cried
    i give into you,
    to suicide
  2. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    That is an amazing poem, please dont give in. You can get thru anything if you believe in yourself
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I second that emotion!:smile: A great poem but just leave those feelings as feelings - don't turn them into actions, please.:sad: Please don't silence that lovely yearning voice inside you.:smile: :smile:


  4. Your expressions are the worthiest of battles... It's why we're *here*. Don't stop...

  5. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    thank you :hug:
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