To have loved

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by sgtsmoke, Mar 28, 2009.

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  1. sgtsmoke

    sgtsmoke New Member

    To have loved was great her warm embrace could've melted the coldest snows of winter if she had stayed past that crazy day i would not be frowning, drowning ,dieing, with every breath i take i wish i had not made that grave mistake shoulve swallowed my pride and today she would have been my bride i will always love her til the ends of time wishing her love was once again mine.

    Erik B.
  2. jameslyons

    jameslyons Well-Known Member


    Nice format.

    Maybe read aloud and work on cadence?
  3. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    awe I am sorry :hug: :heart:
    could've written the same thing about a girl I used to be with
  4. Regenesis

    Regenesis Well-Known Member

    At least you had one and she loved you.No one will love me(except for my dog)
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