To her

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 26, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    A deathless dream
    the warm embrace
    her face
    touching mine
    i think "this must be divine"
    i love her little squeaks
    towards those little shrieks
    of newborn animals
    she means the world to me
    she is my symmetry
    my all and only
    and how i wish to be with her
    safe and warm
    wrapped in this eternal summer
    my love
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I love this poem. :smile:
  3. innocencexisxlove

    innocencexisxlove Well-Known Member

    its amazing<3
    truely from the heart.
    I agree with lynn!
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  4. Almostgone

    Almostgone Member

    Wow, that is the most beautiful poem. It evokes a really sweet and longing feeling.
    You are an inspired writer. We all hope to provoke some kind of emotion, to share ourselves on this level. Good job, great writing!
  5. Bambi

    Bambi Well-Known Member

    Confuzzle that was awesome! I wish someone felt those things about me!

    Love you! B
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