Today, Tomorrow and the day after

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by me myself and i, Feb 1, 2011.

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  1. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    I cant speak a word, for the are no ears
    I cant cry and hug and pour out my fears
    All i can do, is remain soiled and unused
    Part of this chair, it and me are now fused.

    Sat here alone, night after night
    Curled in a ball, empty of the fight
    People in the street look straight ahead
    Invisible am i and lonely in bed

    No one knows my name, except when i type
    Even at the keyboard, people sick of my gripe
    I cannot moan, for they have their own worst pain
    All i wish to do, is live content again

    I can hear the silence in my own tortured mind
    Memories and loss is all that i find
    I have reached the point where im stopping to care
    Inside my heart, im beginning to dare

    Everydays a new one, i know that myself
    As each sun rises, it takes me by its stealth
    Lonelyness and death comforting, when they entwine
    Its always the devil with which i dine.
  2. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member


    So poignant... beautifully spoken of the heartache and pain so many of us feel!

    Hugs to you, hoping things start getting better for you really soon, in your loneliest hour may you know you are never alone... and know you always have listening ears...
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Never sick of you hun never i write so well i hope you contine to create poems that tell of sometimes our living hell. Just know each work you do put to the screen they will always be seen okay and heard in our hearts too. hugs
  4. texaskitty

    texaskitty SF Cat Lady Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: so eloquently put, spent some time curled in a ball myself today
  5. Nataria

    Nataria Well-Known Member

    *hugs* you're a really skilled writer Pete,thankyou for sharing
  6. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Please know that we see you much different than what you write here, 29...big hugs, the other 29
  7. Arthur

    Arthur Account Closed


    Great poem, but i sense a lot of pain in you, i wish i could take it away.

    I care for you a lot!

    Take care pal!
  8. black orchid

    black orchid Well-Known Member

    I wish i could express my feelings like this, you certainly have a gift :)

    Thanks for sharing
  9. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    im sorry youre so alone petey.. its beautifully written and really touching... but never tired of you, never ever.. i care sweets, am always here if you want to talk :hug: :hug:
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