Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Isa, Feb 27, 2006.

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  1. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Today i was a some one
    Today people laughed when I spoke
    Today people

    Today I wasnt a dotted line
    Or a shadow
    Or a locked up in your house

    Today I wasnt half of what I was
    Today I might of touched someones life.

    Today was half a second long.

    tomorrow will be longer.
    Tomorrow will be like yesterday.
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a beautiful poem hun! I really liked it!

    Love BP
  3. tinuviel

    tinuviel Well-Known Member

    Omg...this poem gave me shivers... :smile: It's realy great! I love it...
    I'm usualy not the poetic kind of person considering I don't know how to write any, but this is realy cool!!!
  4. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    I was in chat with Alex Adam CrystalGoddess and Vampire and I felt sorta happy.
    But its like a snapshot of happy, so I wrote this. <3
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    good poem!
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