Today

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by hollowvoice, Oct 13, 2010.

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  1. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    SWIRLING THROUGH MY MIND TONIGHT
    THOUGHTS OF YOU
    MY HEART GOES TIGHT

    YOUR EYES YOUR SMILE
    YOUR WARM CARESS
    NO MATTER WHAT
    I LOVED YOUR ZEST

    I THOUGHT I SAW YOU
    YESTERDAY
    BUT YOU JUST TURNED
    AND WALKED AWAY

    SO I WENT HOME
    AND GAVE A CRY
    IM GIVING LIFE
    ANOTHER TRY

    ANDI
    yeah i know rubbish ending?
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    in saying it though it helps i like your poem especially the ending :hugtackles::hugtackles:
     
  3. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    I liked the ending..nice poem :)
     
  4. Landlocked blues

    Landlocked blues Well-Known Member

    awww Andi. This is lovely. :hug:
     
  5. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    I love this! :)
     
  6. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Amen!
     
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