Too Many

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Jan 10, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    “Too Many”

    Too many hopes
    Too many dreams
    Too much effort for what it seems

    Too many forgotten lies
    Too many ultimate truths
    Too many ways to die

    Too many sins
    Too many questions from within
    Too many shadows to hide in

    Too many ways to end this
    Suffering of self

    Forgive me, I’ve seen it all
    Every seed of life makes my skin crawl
    So if you see me shrinking from fame
    It’s because your pleading eyes are to blame
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :eek:hmy: Wow!:eek:hmy: Well put! ...but I'm sorry you are having these feelings.:sad:

    love and hugs,

  3. shellz

    shellz Guest

    Wow awesome job! Keep it up!
  4. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Don't be sorry, it's my fault.
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow... once again i know the feeling...

  6. 44Bedtime_Bear

    44Bedtime_Bear Active Member

    Thankyou for wrighting something with such deep feeling of depth I can relate
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