Too Much

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Aug 24, 2007.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    I've been swallowing my pain,
    Overlooking the razor blade's stain.

    I've been keeping it all inside,
    I know that i should have already died.

    Giving up i fall to the floor,
    I dont want to hurt anymore.

    I just want to stop using the knife,
    I want to be happy living this life.

    I want to stop but it's too much to endure,
    Cut my arm open, and let the blood pour.

    Hopefully someone will see through my lying,
    And will wipe away the tears i am crying.

    :cry:
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    oh hun,

    I am so so sorry you are feeling this way. If i could just give you a hug I would. You are so deserving of a happy life and I hope you reach that point where you can have that.

    The poem was really sad but really beautiful. Love yah hun

    Kells
     
  3. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    Oh :sad:...Lucy..Such a beautiful, sad poem.... :hug: :hug:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: lucy,good poem!
     
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