Torn In Two

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Mar 5, 2011.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    ~ Torn In Two ~

    here I sit, about to rip
    in pieces of me, and pieces of you. And of you too.
    I can't complain, its my fault.
    I've put myself in harms way far too many times.
    On the bright side, theres no dark side,
    To suicide. In my mind, oh to free me from myself.
    Torn in two, I'm so through
    with all my mind and hearts bullshit.

    … Oh well never mind. Maybe i'll just bide my time.
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    How painful of a split...and one I know very well...thanks for putting it into words...J
  3. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Sometimes it feels good to remove all that reminds you of a better time. It's as if your life is already destroyed, so the memory should also be destroyed. This poem is very sad, and it captures the emotions one goes through in similar situations. I enjoyed reading it. Nothing wrong with biding time. :console:
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