Transition

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 4, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    Long ago i had a merry soul
    full of life and merry ways, that often rang so true
    but then i cracked, bashed my mind into pieces, falling down the hole
    of despair
    i really didn't care
    whether these thoughts of self revenge
    car crashes, cut throats, creeping, coming with no stop
    would bring me to an edge
    c'mon, whats the harm in one little hop?
    i knew these thoughts were not so good
    so i seeked help, left outside my neighborhood
    of scars and suicide, secure and stuck in my little mind
    and came here scared, fearful, unprepared for those so kind
    who came to me, said that they were here for me
    well that stopped the thoughts, they ran away, in one, two, three
    they came back later
    but now they sit in a line, anxious for a waiter
    to bring them to a table of my sorrow
    no thanks sir, maybe tomorrow?
    i don't know how I'll live on from now
    I still run from people
    i don't want to see their pitying faces asking how
    but there is a glimmer of hope
    that i dunno, helps me cope
     
  2. triggs

    triggs Account Closed

    :hug: well done hun, this is really good xx
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem :)
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    thanks i like the ending of the poem a glimmer of hope good read
     
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