Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thesemomentsastheypass, May 26, 2006.

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  1. thesemomentsastheypass

    thesemomentsastheypass Well-Known Member


    A thousand echoes
    of rose wilt years
    held water tight
    in an elephant mind
    revolve and resonate
    encroach and recede
    with shoreline rhythm

    Liquid eyes spill
    tear-slicked despair
    tracing contours
    of a guilt drenched face
    and hope too fluid to hold
    cascades to tributaries of indecision
    and into an ocean of un-sailable dreams
  2. So flowing...and so beautiful as sad. I'm near speechless. How you capture the essence. (you'll have to add this one to your "list" - i just did)

  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    your imagery is so powerful in this one...

    the descriptions carried me away and in the end I felt the silence of your ocean.

  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    you can feel this one as you read it...

    and when it ended, it was a peaceful landing...

  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear Moments;

    Beautiful and expressive as always.:smile: Thank you for sharing.:smile: :smile:

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