truth

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by cthulhu, Sep 12, 2006.

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  1. cthulhu

    cthulhu Well-Known Member

    to live soly for another
    is to smother ones soul
    to exteguish your light
    and mask your heart in anothers shadow
    find your own path to salvation
    look to your self for shelter
    find your own meals
    and never let anothers hope be your own
    share if you msut
    but your hopes and dreams will wither if given no atention
     
  2. Truth indeed...
    but once again you denigrate yourself
    by lack of checking spelling!

    If you hold to your own truth,
    then By God
    make sure you express it rightly!

    You've such talent!
    USE IT!

    FAL1
     
  3. cthulhu

    cthulhu Well-Known Member

    self expretion taks many forms, and mine is poorly spelled poetry...
     
  4. I tell you because it's worth the effort - your words are brilliant (brilliant!), needing fine tuning not in release, but in textual expression. I mean no offence. Your sentiments are pure and wonderful...

    FAL1
     
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  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Never mind the spelling* - the meaning comes across loud and clear!!:smile: :smile: I like it!:smile:

    least

    *I can safely say that, being an English major by birth, and spelling is important so that all who read may understand your feelings, but still it's beautiful; beautiful and true.
     
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