Twisted Honesty

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Forsaken Heretic, Apr 20, 2008.

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  1. Forsaken Heretic

    Forsaken Heretic Well-Known Member

    I'm wishing more and more I didn't feel the way I do.

    Twisted Honesty

    Waves of darkness, visions blurred.
    Random thoughts, all sound absurd.
    Lost in feelings, uncontrolled,
    Falling further into this hole.

    Wounded deeper then before
    Scarlet drops, on tiled floors.
    Reaching out, but falling short
    No longer wanting your support.

    Giving up, soon giving in.
    No longer playing, no chance to win.
    Searching blindly, faith fades away
    Waves of darkness will never stray.
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    :hug: this is really good hun. the first two lines are my favorite. keep posting!!!
     
  3. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    I really like that, you have talent. :smile:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    awesome :smile:
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    That was good. I like it and can relate to it.
     
  6. Forsaken Heretic

    Forsaken Heretic Well-Known Member

    Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it.
     
  7. It really, really describes those feelings (as well as those of others) very well!

    Though I'm sorry for such feelings in the first place...:sad:
    But it can help (even a tiny bit) to let them out...
     
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