Two Left Feet [[Nove Otto]]

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by JustFirefly, Feb 5, 2012.

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  1. JustFirefly

    JustFirefly Well-Known Member

    Two Left Feet [[Nove Otto]]

    I learn my heart has two left feet,
    As it begins to skip a beat;
    Two steps forward and five behind
    As we dance to a silly rhyme.
    Yet still I can not call you mine,
    Because my love gets undermined
    Every single time I have tried
    I trip again and lose my pride,
    Stumbling into the undefined.

    A Nove Otto is a poem that is 9 lines long. each line has 8 syllables. The rhyme scheme is AABCCBDDB
    Yep.
    Hope you like it.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I love your poem how it is written and the words you use to describe your feelings
     
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Wow! Well done and very clever! I like it a lot :)
     
  4. JustFirefly

    JustFirefly Well-Known Member

    Thank you :3 im practicing formed poetry for now. :3 I write a lot of poems and im glad you both enjoyed it.
     
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