Two poems

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Acy, Oct 20, 2008.

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Sweet Kisses

    do not trail
    your touch
    along my limbs

    I know already that you
    in the searing heat
    of the sun​
    will evaporate
    just as your sweetest
    kisses of morning do


    The Gravity of It All

    it is no secret:
    we crawl
    we walk
    we stumble
    then fall

    it is no secret:
    the gravity of it all

    but then
    we make an effort
    and we do it all
    again

    it is no secret:
    some forces we cannot fight
    yet those we can, we do
    despite
    the gravity of it all
     
  2. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni

    i like them both especially gravity :D
     
  3. Anju

    Anju Well-Known Member

    They're really good :biggrin: I like gravity more but both good.
     
  4. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    wow, really really good :O
     
  5. cinZamurai

    cinZamurai Well-Known Member

    Nice, and yeah the gravity was really cool.
    Thanks for shareing :D
     
  6. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Thanks all. :)blink: I started both of them using my "magnetic poetry" fridge-set. :laugh:)
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    beautiful poems acy :)
     
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