Unable to forget but free to regret

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Oct 19, 2006.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Drowning in the music,
    Distracting myself from the sick

    Close my eyes and forget
    Pass the joint, i want a hit.

    Forget the present and past,
    This high wont always last

    Blind the memories brought to mind,
    the ones i thought i left behind

    Brought back from my soul
    Reminding me that i am no longer whole

    Destract my mind my soul my heart
    These memories tear me apart

    yeah so i cant think of anything else.... written because of old and recent events.
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni


    I like the concept behind that. I can relate. Being plagued by past memories is never fun, and it's very difficult to escape.

    However, I hope things aren't too bad, at the moment. And I hope you keep writing such terrific poetry.

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear Fear;

    I like it very much!:smile: :smile: You get better and better my dear! You have much talent!:smile:


  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    You are a very wonderful poet hun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :thumbup: :yes: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :yes: :thumbup:

    ~ huggles:hug:,
    Carolyn ~
  5. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

  6. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    I agree with what the others have said already. Keep sharing with us fear. :hug:
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