Under the shadow of Babel

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mordeci, Aug 2, 2009.

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  1. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    Fallen to the wayside,
    They scream silently,
    Their voices echo’s in the shadows,
    Heard throughout the night,

    Fallen in the gutter,
    They climb to escape,
    Searching for a light,
    Crawling over each other to reach Zion,

    Fallen all alone,
    They look for a helping hand,
    Begging for a sanctuary,
    To those who can’t understand.
     
  2. triggs

    triggs Account Closed

    wow :unsure: i don't know how to describe it
    it's really strong hun
    kind of hit me, if that makes sense :hug:
    hope you're okay
    brilliant poem xxx
     
  3. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    very well writen!
    keep posting, i want to read mooooore!
     
  4. Mordeci

    Mordeci Banned Member

    Thanks for the compliments, I will defintly try and write more.:biggrin:
     
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow emotion thank you
    keep writing indeed
    can't wait to read next one
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
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