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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by unknown loner, Aug 2, 2009.

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  1. unknown loner

    unknown loner Active Member

    Slit her wrist
    Lick her blood
    All you do
    Is make her pain

    You push her down
    When she gets up
    All she wants is love
    All you do is shove

    Catch her soul
    Lock it in a cage
    Stay in control
    Its all you have

    Consume her body
    With the fist marks
    Don’t worry, she fell
    The lies make her scream

    You are the nightmare
    She wakes up from
    Hold her down
    So she doesn’t wake up
     
  2. necrodude

    necrodude Well-Known Member

    very dark. quite brutal. i like it :)
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Glad to see you are putting words to you pain and hate emotions well done.
     
  4. triggs

    triggs Account Closed

    :hug:
    great poem hun
    hope you're doing okay xx
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    brilliant :hug:
     
  6. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Very visceral - it has quite an impact.
     
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