Untitled poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by midnightstar, Oct 23, 2012.

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  1. midnightstar

    midnightstar Senior Member

    Long ago you were in my heart
    Then we drifted apart
    There's nothing left to say
    Nothing left to save anyway

    My heart is dead now
    You don't know how
    Why should I tell you
    When you spread your wings and flew

    You left me alone in pain
    With nothing to hope for or gain
    Painful memories filling my head
    Wishing I was with you instead

    I'm afraid to love anyone again
    Love is like a ball and chain
    Love just doesn't seem to last
    I learnt this the hard way in the past
     
  2. NYJmpMaster

    NYJmpMaster Have a question? Message Me Staff Member Forum Owner ADMIN

    Thank you for sharing a heartfelt poem. Love can be a ball and chain, but just sometimes it is a weight worth carrying.
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Oh hun i do hope you find the courage to trust again and to reach out Not all love ends in pain I hope you meet someone who shows you true love hugs
     
  4. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    It hurts when things don't work out. When one love doesn't last, it leaves open a space to discover a relationship that might be even better. I that happens for you.
     
  5. Wispiwill

    Wispiwill Well-Known Member

    Nicely written.
     
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