Untitled poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Acy, Jul 9, 2009.

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Untitled (also unfinished…?)

    “Kids say the darnedest things!”
    remarked a clever
    and successful
    gentle and mild-mannered
    television host of the 1960s.

    Triumphant baby-boomers
    in their time
    would rather play
    with the cardboard box
    than the toy it brought,
    their bright minds conjuring
    a car, a house, a picket fence,
    a rocket into space
    and home again for dinner.

    Back then,
    boxes challenged reality
    and life was what you made it

    Now adults say the damnedest things
    their far-flung dreams
    just so much noise
    just empty words in academic halls
    just stories from the news
    just cardboard walls

    there is no car, no house,
    no picket fence,
    there is no rocket home tonight.

  2. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    empty words in academic halls...

    Good stuff! I like the ending too.:rockon:
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem hun :hug:
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