Untitled Poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Ferret, Feb 5, 2010.

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  1. Ferret

    Ferret Well-Known Member

    My only love, come and lost
    Your memory shivers like bitter frost
    Our time together did not last
    Now all I have is your forgotten past

    I'd die to mend our broken dream
    To love you again seems so serene
    But in the dark, an evil remains
    You've tied me down in thorns and chains

    Now you're with another love
    I hear the voice, my thoughts it shoves
    My soul I pray for me to take
    No longer exists in your wake

    The soul I pray for you to hold and embrace.......
     
  2. I think it's a good poem. Well writen.
     
  3. PoisonS

    PoisonS Well-Known Member

    The emotions you convey in this poem are very moving. Like listening to a sad song.
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Very well written a poem from the heart
     
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