Untitled. (song)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sa Palomera, Apr 5, 2010.

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  1. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    So I wrote this poem a little less than a year ago and a friend of mine turned it into a song. I've uploaded it to my website and decided to share it with y'all.

    around 2:20 he made a little mistake, sorry it's on the recording, but we only recorded it once, so yeah.

    http://www.ishyworld.com/uploads/sjalom_untitled.wma

    let me state once more; I only wrote the lyrics. All other credit goes to my friend.



    Everywhere I look,
    I’m reminded of your face
    It makes me wish,
    I was at another place.

    Somewhere close to you
    Somewhere away from here
    All I want to do
    Is go over there.

    So I can be with you,
    Just be with you,
    Nobody but you,
    all I need is you.

    You’re the only one
    Who seems to understand
    Who I am
    Thanks to you I’m on the mend.

    I want to be with you
    Just be with you
    Nobody but you
    All I need is you.

    Somewhere close to you
    Somewhere away from here
    All I want to do
    Is go over there.

    I want to be with you
    Just be with you
    Nobody but you
    All I need is you.
     
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  2. xXxRNBxXx

    xXxRNBxXx Senior member

    aww etser that is lovely.... that actually brought a tear to my eye :( xxx
     
  3. Nerve

    Nerve Well-Known Member

    i really enjoy it =)
     
  4. pipilo

    pipilo Member

    Beautiful.
     
  5. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

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