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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Aug 29, 2007.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Oh Father
    I did it
    Because
    When I woke up
    I looked to tomorrow and saw
    You fighting again
    Hitting mum again
    Getting drunk again
    Getting depressed again
    Me looking after you again
    Watching you puke again
    And getting stressed again
    I saw
    Me
    Lying to the school again
    As I stayed home
    To make sure you didn’t kill yourself again
    To make sure mum didn’t do anything rash again
    Cause I woke up
    And tomorrow I saw that things wouldn’t change
    Even if you say otherwise
    The past, present and future are just the same
    There’s no way out
    And that’s why, Father
    That’s why
    I tried to die
     
  2. It's emotional and I can understand the story that it tells. It's good work & assuming that it's personal for you, you've done a very good job of relaying your feelings, which is not always easy for people to do.
     
  3. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    i like it
     
  4. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    TDM,
    Oh sweetheart this is a very good poem. It is deep and emotional and also very powerful. I can understand exactly what it is saying. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Love it :hug:
     
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